I don't know
All those lines seem totally random, yet they still combine to give me an intense feeling of claustrophobia, like they're a roof falling down on me. They also remind me of freeways sprawling out in random directions (good thing ) I think this peice would be even better if it was entirely those lines... the nebula-looking part, however cool looking, seems out of place to me. I like the effect you did with the letters, making them semi-transparent doesn't constrict the art, something that happens a lot when you add text to things. !

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Swirly, very professional look for being swirly. good luck in the contest!

good luck ^^

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yeh i kina agree with u about the nebula thing. i really don't give a damn about this piece though. it is, as i said, for a compulsory contest which i think is wrong. thanks for the comments though. you always have something useful to say.

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uhuh swirly is good thanks for the comment and the luck

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thank you.

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aww ...... shucks

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your welcome XD

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Turn the bottom part completely black and change the affekted text around a bit and you have the best upload until now.

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